“The Rumble of the Milk Trucks” by John Martin May 17, 2008
Posted by Rodger Jacobs in On Literature.Tags: Connecticut, John Martin, poetry, poets, writers, writing
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Connecticut, 1989
The rumble of the milk trucks
grinding up
Chester Main Road
slacking and then
roaring
as we lay on our
backs in the road
our fingers weary
waiting for the slow
curving variations in the growl
these were no ordinary
milk trucks
those of our past
with jolly
drivers with
caps and insignias
these were 18
wheeled behemoths
crawling up
a hill a mile
long to drain
the milk of dozens
of cows who
are always complaining about
the early morning
we sat, wrote,
edged,
gulped coffee
and steaks
at any time
the day was fluid
and the nights were
made of
such that we
could not discern
the rolling
clocks
and the simultaneous
droning of
IT
we stored it
in the eaves
words dripped from
greasy fingers
and fled from
air-deprived
pasts
only to ascend
to the same
we are no longer
we
but we still ooze
words
I’m not sure
where the
words ooze
from
but they keep showing
up
under foot

Love, love, love this one. And not just because I live in Connecticut!
What an economy of language and rhythm. Great job.
It’s a very nice piece indeed, Eric.
Yes, this is friggin’ brilliant, the nostalgia, the metaphors, the whole idea is a little slice of perfection. Mr. Martin, bravo!
All the kind words are much appreciated. Of course, this may be the only decent thing I’ve ever written, I don’t know.