Our First Contributor: Scot Young
Somewhat of a Symbionese Liberation Army
Found Poem with Credits
to Bob Dylan and CNN
sara jane olsen
was released
today
one year early with
interstate parole
due to clerical error…
rearrested
returned
a bureaucratic
wtf
investigation underway
to determine why
you don’t need
a weather man
to know which way
the wind blows
(Scott Young writes for Be Not Inhospitable To Strangers)
A flawless piece, Scot. I like the introduction of modern language:
a bureaucratic
WTF
Comment by Rodger Jacobs — March 23, 2008 @ 7:22 pm
Active voice, engaging the craft, connecting to the world, cool,
Comment by Paul — March 23, 2008 @ 9:15 pm
Yes the bureaucratic WTF is brilliant. Structurally this is very good, really tells it.
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