Our First Contributor: Scot Young March 23, 2008
Posted by Rodger Jacobs in Uncategorized.Tags: Bob Dylan, poetry, poets, Sara Jane Olsen, Scot Young
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Somewhat of a Symbionese Liberation Army
Found Poem with Credits
to Bob Dylan and CNN
sara jane olsen
was released
today
one year early with
interstate parole
due to clerical error…
rearrested
returned
a bureaucratic
wtf
investigation underway
to determine why
you don’t need
a weather man
to know which way
the wind blows
(Scott Young writes for Be Not Inhospitable To Strangers)
A flawless piece, Scot. I like the introduction of modern language:
a bureaucratic
WTF
Active voice, engaging the craft, connecting to the world, cool,
Yes the bureaucratic WTF is brilliant. Structurally this is very good, really tells it.
[...] Look what I found at Hemingway’s Shotgun Somewhat of a Symbionese Liberation Army Found Poem with Credits to Bob Dylan and CNN [...]
yeah, Dylan sings the truth…austinnewblog.blogspot.com
well yah, Dylan sings it, and Young poignantly writes it.